Page 9 work

      Well it looks like I'm still going to be narrating in these pages which is a relief for me. I'm so scared of dialog between characters for some reason. I REALLY don't want the dialog to feel stilted!
     I think it might help my stilted problem if I have more then one type of speech bubble per page. Kinda like what I did with page 6-7. I think it made it flow better.